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Well it's genuinely new concept and I am looking forward to more but i think story also need to be oriented towards mc rather than Arthur seriously he is having to much pov of him and I am hoping one day when he shows his power looking forward to how others would react as he is going to breaking their logic and question themselves HOW? And i am looking forward to his future and dude kinda need someone love's him by the way is there romance and who is the pretty girl as his own kinda like you know loose hope of him or something in this lines well overall it's good

An Extra in TBATE

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I am trying to not make the mc too strong suddenly because it destroys the whole concept of Fan Fiction. But do not worry the MC will have more POV after 10 or 11 chapters.