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In Marvel with Gacha
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Yes... The problem with these stories is that the protagonist simply uses the powerful items immediately without having a well-established goal. I mean, yes, you want to protect the planet, but that's very ambiguous. How much time are you willing to sacrifice and how much do you want to protect the planet? What are you specifically threatening? In these stories the best thing to do is not go from 0 to 100 or too slowly. If you do it slowly, not by showing a standard romance plot that is everywhere, but by putting its goals, but also its difficulties, into perspective. Just watching things happen suddenly, already done, like a building creation loading bar in a game, is boring.
Darwin111111:Yes... The problem with these stories is that the protagonist simply uses the powerful items immediately without having a well-established goal. I mean, yes, you want to protect the planet, but that's very ambiguous. How much time are you willing to sacrifice and how much do you want to protect the planet? What are you specifically threatening? In these stories the best thing to do is not go from 0 to 100 or too slowly. If you do it slowly, not by showing a standard romance plot that is everywhere, but by putting its goals, but also its difficulties, into perspective. Just watching things happen suddenly, already done, like a building creation loading bar in a game, is boring.