Review Detail of Hanni_Baal in LOTM: Divine Pathway System

Item: LOTM: Divine Pathway System
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Hey! Did you erase the chapter? Everything is ok? Is dropped? Or in a Hiatus? Or are you editing from the beginning? Is just to know if I keep it in my Library, after all, it sounded good...

LOTM: Divine Pathway System

DelusionalGod

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Just rewrite it. I wanted it to have no obvious plot hole like how Azriel managed to see the unique and complex spell carved to his arm while being a Sequence 9 of Mystery Pryer. So, yeah beginning with new character template.

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OK! So far I like the idea!!

DelusionalGod:Just rewrite it. I wanted it to have no obvious plot hole like how Azriel managed to see the unique and complex spell carved to his arm while being a Sequence 9 of Mystery Pryer. So, yeah beginning with new character template.