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MeepsNewGroove
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Hello readers! I’d you one now stumbled on this book I just shred to say thank for either enjoying or giving feedback! So far I haven’t decided which route the story will go and if it’ll be romance or not and if it is it will be a nonharem one, so sorry harem lovers 🙇‍♂️. Anyways please check out the poll I’ve created on chapter 1 since I’d enjoy writing what you, the readers would enjoy. If not I’ll possibly make the decision myself tomorrow or sometime soon

Revolutionizing a new world

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Thank you reader for your vote and various skills. I already have a system in mind so far and It’s main usage will be to give MC “knowledge” package related to certain technological advances and the more he progress, the more tech he’ll “unlock”. Of course if MC is in..let’s say the Stone Age and he manages to make gunpowder earlier than expected? He’ll be rewarded for it, idk what the rewards will be, but yeah, no useless missions that punish the MC if he doesn’t complete them. MC will indeed have a status menu though. It’ll be somewhat similar to a Ark/Avatar fanfic I read awhile ago which I’ll link in the synopsis soon. I’ll make another poll regarding this as well as I have multiple system ideas

Hasan_Shopnil:I choose Option 3. Maybe Both. A Person without System's Help will be missing a lot of necessary Knowledge to build a Proper Kingdom. MC should also Re-Introduce Various Entertainments like "[Songs,Music,Movies,Anime,Cartoons,Comics,Manga,Manhwa,Manhua,Novels,Animated Movies,Video Games]"etc. in that New World but Improve the Original Entertainments. I mean Don't Completely Change them,That'll be Fanfic. Just "(Improve their Original Quality,Remove Plot Holes,Expand the Verses Further)" etc. For Example:Suppose you Improve Original Naruto,So the things you could Improve&Include are: "[Quality of the Anime&Manga could be Improved;Character Design,Background,Voice Actors,Graphics etc.could be Improved,Naruto's and Other Character's Immature voice could change with Age with different Voice Actors which will be More Realistic;A More Skilled Naruto{learned about his Wind Affinity,Various Ninjutsu,Body Flicker Jutsu,Rasengan,Chakra Flow,Chakra Sensory&Camouflage,Spying,Assassination,Poltics,Leadership Skills,learn Various Wind Release Jutsu,Genjutsu Breaking,Taijutsu,Shurikenjutsu,Kenjutsu,Fuinjutsu,Iryo-Jutsu,Senjutsu,Sage Mode,RasenShuriken,Awakening his Kekkei Genkai's such as "Uzumaki Sealing Chains,Haeling by Biting,Mind's Eye of Kagura";Flying Thunder-God jutsu,Summoning,De-Summoning&Re-Verse Summoning,9-Tails Kurama Mode,Sage of Six-Paths Mode,Absorbing all Tailed Beasts to form a Connection to Acquire Boil Release,Lava Release etc.Kekkei Genkai;Baryon Mode(last Resort)};Removing Plot Holes;Showing the Situation of Senju&Uzumaki Clans and How Hiruzen failed them&became Incompetent while he got entagld in Politics and a Stickler for Peace who doesn't want Change;Show all other Naruto World Clans&Villages more extensively;Expand the Naruto World to Other Continents as "Naruto" world Only resembles 'Japan' then What about Other Continents&Countries like 'US,Korea,China,India' etc.which could be focused on&expanded-upon;Only then should the Story Progress Outside of Naruto World Off-Planet towards the Otsutsuki Clan] etc. *Just a Basic Direction from Me.* Don't be offended Pls,Just Some Suggestions. Also,With System Don't include "HP&MP" Stats;That's Impractical in Real Life. Read "Hollywood Head-Hunting System" Fic for a Good System to use as Reference;Just that same "Solo Leveling&Gamer" System won't Do as Each World has different Abilities&Limits;so Customize your System for the World you want to Create. For Me,A System that Gives Various "Knowledge,Helps gain Proficiency in various Skills&Perks" is the Best System. So,"(NO compulsory Missions,NO extensive absurd Rewards&Penalty,NO BS Shop Items that doesn't suit MC's World,NO Inventory that could Absorb any attacks thrown at MC which is too Unreasonable,NO System that Makes MC way too OP&Unkillable)"
Hasan_Shopnil
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I choose Option 3. Maybe Both. A Person without System's Help will be missing a lot of necessary Knowledge to build a Proper Kingdom. MC should also Re-Introduce Various Entertainments like "[Songs,Music,Movies,Anime,Cartoons,Comics,Manga,Manhwa,Manhua,Novels,Animated Movies,Video Games]"etc. in that New World but Improve the Original Entertainments. I mean Don't Completely Change them,That'll be Fanfic. Just "(Improve their Original Quality,Remove Plot Holes,Expand the Verses Further)" etc. For Example:Suppose you Improve Original Naruto,So the things you could Improve&Include are: "[Quality of the Anime&Manga could be Improved;Character Design,Background,Voice Actors,Graphics etc.could be Improved,Naruto's and Other Character's Immature voice could change with Age with different Voice Actors which will be More Realistic;A More Skilled Naruto{learned about his Wind Affinity,Various Ninjutsu,Body Flicker Jutsu,Rasengan,Chakra Flow,Chakra Sensory&Camouflage,Spying,Assassination,Poltics,Leadership Skills,learn Various Wind Release Jutsu,Genjutsu Breaking,Taijutsu,Shurikenjutsu,Kenjutsu,Fuinjutsu,Iryo-Jutsu,Senjutsu,Sage Mode,RasenShuriken,Awakening his Kekkei Genkai's such as "Uzumaki Sealing Chains,Haeling by Biting,Mind's Eye of Kagura";Flying Thunder-God jutsu,Summoning,De-Summoning&Re-Verse Summoning,9-Tails Kurama Mode,Sage of Six-Paths Mode,Absorbing all Tailed Beasts to form a Connection to Acquire Boil Release,Lava Release etc.Kekkei Genkai;Baryon Mode(last Resort)};Removing Plot Holes;Showing the Situation of Senju&Uzumaki Clans and How Hiruzen failed them&became Incompetent while he got entagld in Politics and a Stickler for Peace who doesn't want Change;Show all other Naruto World Clans&Villages more extensively;Expand the Naruto World to Other Continents as "Naruto" world Only resembles 'Japan' then What about Other Continents&Countries like 'US,Korea,China,India' etc.which could be focused on&expanded-upon;Only then should the Story Progress Outside of Naruto World Off-Planet towards the Otsutsuki Clan] etc. *Just a Basic Direction from Me.* Don't be offended Pls,Just Some Suggestions. Also,With System Don't include "HP&MP" Stats;That's Impractical in Real Life. Read "Hollywood Head-Hunting System" Fic for a Good System to use as Reference;Just that same "Solo Leveling&Gamer" System won't Do as Each World has different Abilities&Limits;so Customize your System for the World you want to Create. For Me,A System that Gives Various "Knowledge,Helps gain Proficiency in various Skills&Perks" is the Best System. So,"(NO compulsory Missions,NO extensive absurd Rewards&Penalty,NO BS Shop Items that doesn't suit MC's World,NO Inventory that could Absorb any attacks thrown at MC which is too Unreasonable,NO System that Makes MC way too OP&Unkillable)"

Hasan_Shopnil
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MC should Learn&Acquire "[Ambidexterity;Multi-Tasking;Muscle Memory;Enhanced IQ&EQ{Perk};Almost Eiditic Memory{Perk};Selective Memory Erasure for himself{Perk};Thought Acceleration{Perk};Parallal Thinking{Perk};Strong&Indomitable WillPower{Perk};Mental Refreshing{Perk};Mind&Soul Protection{Perk};Fast Learner{Perk};Meditation&Yoga;Emotions such as "(Fear&Boredome)" Erasure{Perk};(Nightmare,Snooring,Sleep Walking&Sleep Talking,Blabbering&Exposing Secrets while Drunk)etc.Immunity{Perk};High Patience{Perk};High Luck{Perk};Handsomeness(Jet Black Hair,6ft Height,Torquish-Bluish-Green Eyes etc.){Perk};Parkour;Acrobatics&Gymnastics;Equilibrium{Perk};Various Martial Arts;Archery;Kendo;Marksmanship;Bullet Time Skill{Perk};Swordsmanship;Daggers Mastery;Ranged Projectiles Throwing;Various Weapon Mastery;Enhanced-(Reaction Speed&Reaction Time){Perk};Enhanced Reflexes{Perk};Enhanced Senses&Instinct{Perk};Sixth Sense{Perk};Danger Sense{Perk};Analyse&Deciphering Skill{Perk};Sports related Skills/Knowledge;Atheletes' Zone State{Perk};Detective Skills;Spying;Tracking;Camouflage/Stealth;Assassination;Intel/Info Gathering;Disguising Skill;Wild Life Survival;Cooking;Navigating/Map Reading/Geographical Knowledge;Scientific&Technological Knowledge;Hacking;Programming;Horsemanship/Vehiclemanship;Battle Formations&Combat Strategy Knowledge;Political&Psychological Knowledge;Combat while Moving/Running;Taking Terrain Advantage while Combat;Underwater&Space Survival{Perk};Language Skills-(English,Japanese,Korean,Chinese,Arabic,Hindi,Tamil,Telugu);Writing Skills;Drawing/Painting Skills;Animating Skills;Video Game Creation Skills;Movie Creation related Skills;Singing&Dancing;Seduction Resistence{Perk};Pain-(Resistence,Endurance&Tolerence){Perk};Torture Tolerence{Perk};Business related Skills;(Cold,Heat,Poison,Virus etc.)-Resistence{Perk};Disease Immunity{Perk};Casanova/Woeing Skills{Perk};S*x Mastery(NO Ahegao){Perk};Conception/Pregnency Control{Perk};Regenerative Healing Factor(Controlable){Perk};Mind&Soul Healing/Recovery{Perk};Decelerated Aging{Perk};Youth Retainment/Eternal Youth{Perk};Long Lifespan{Perk};Skills Sharing with only those Females that MC had Inter-Course with(Sharable Skills' Examples are:Beautification,Fast Learner,High Luck,Danger Sense,Enhanced Reflexes,Disease Resistence,Minor Healing Factor,Decelerated Aging,Eternal Youth,Long Lifespan etc.){Perk},Various Kingdombuilding Knowledge;Various Entertainment Knowledge]" etc.through his System.

Hasan_Shopnil
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Try reading- 1.Hollywood:Head-Hunting System 2.Olaying Firebending (Legend of Korra SI) 3.Trouble with older woman in the anime-World (and why It is worth It) ....Fics. The Systems used in above fics are acceptable to me. Just Don't give MC an 'OP Inventory' that could Store any Attacks launched at MC;That'd be too Much as MC could Story Any Sword that is Swund at him before he gets Cut,he could story any Bullets&Missiles that's launched at him before he gets affected,MC could also Store Elemental/Energy attacks launched at him,Maybe he could also Re-Launch them at their attackers like Gilgamesh(Nasuverse) as Well;so NO OverPowered Inventory either for MC Pls. *Anyway these are my Suggestions&Advice,Pls Don't be Offended If anything I said hurts you.*😅

MeepsNewGroove:Thank you reader for your vote and various skills. I already have a system in mind so far and It’s main usage will be to give MC “knowledge” package related to certain technological advances and the more he progress, the more tech he’ll “unlock”. Of course if MC is in..let’s say the Stone Age and he manages to make gunpowder earlier than expected? He’ll be rewarded for it, idk what the rewards will be, but yeah, no useless missions that punish the MC if he doesn’t complete them. MC will indeed have a status menu though. It’ll be somewhat similar to a Ark/Avatar fanfic I read awhile ago which I’ll link in the synopsis soon. I’ll make another poll regarding this as well as I have multiple system ideas