Review Detail of Perishable_Heaven in Eclipse Arcana

This is one of those stories that a experienced reader can tell the author put their heart into. While the length of the chapters are on the short side i will say that each chapter carries its own personality. There were one or 2 errors I noticed while reading but it's not the big of a deal, I just tend to over edit my own work, so i tend to pay attention to the placement of every punctuation mark etc. etc. I would like to say this story has some potential down the line as it progresses. Keep up the work Author (^_-)b\