Review Detail of SuryaputraKarna in The Novel's Extra's POV

The author is trying way too hard to make Mc funny and edgy, which is just ruining the novel, like I was a world champion in kendo but left it because I am a loner, gogo gaga, etc. And MC is on his way to becoming a watcher, to the point where he does not even want to talk to anyone because he is a loner and doesn't want to cause changes like that. And for some reason, he hates OG MC because, according to him, OG MC sent him to this world, which does not make any sense