A bit wordy but overall excellent. I like the fact that the MC is committed to defending his family and blood, that he's ready to fight the insidious plots of other families and the cursed Maesters. That he's not just another self-centered MC who only thinks of himself and is never ready to give of himself, to help the people he cares about. I like that the MC is intelligent and calculating. In short, I love this story. Author, write more! And keep it up.
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