It's a good story with an original plot. It's generally well written but if I had to cite one negative point, it would be the choice of words for certain terms specific to Avatar. For example, Fire master should be Fire lord. The use of elements is called Bending and users Benders, Firebenders, Airbenders, ... It is still a very pleasant fanfiction to read that I highly recommend.
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