I found the protagonist's acknowledgment of their limitations to be refreshing and realistic, adding depth to their character. However, I was hoping for more assertiveness and backbone from them, as their obedience to every order felt somewhat one-dimensional. Despite this, the narrative holds promise, especially with the potential consequences the clan faces when boundaries are pushed too far. With a bit more character development and exploration of the consequences within the clan, this story has the potential to be truly gripping and immersive.
HiddenInPlainSight
Liked it!
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