it reads a bit too surreal. it feels like i'm reading about someone dreaming about something wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
Khushal
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Thnx for the review DaoistForthright, it might have been because of my inexperience in writing. But thank you for trying my work and giving your opinion.
or maybe i'm just tired