it reads a bit too surreal. it feels like i'm reading about someone dreaming about something wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
Khushal
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or maybe i'm just tired
Thnx for the review DaoistForthright, it might have been because of my inexperience in writing. But thank you for trying my work and giving your opinion.