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Review Detail of KingLettuce in SON OF DUNE

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KingLettuce
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Fanfic has decent grammar with few mistakes here and there with improvements in later chapters, even with the mistakes it is still easy to understand. There are a lot of time skips and it certainly feels a bit rushed, but overall I enjoy it just fine even with its little mistakes. Keep up the good work Author!!!!!!!!! ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… …………………………………………………………………………

SON OF DUNE

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