Review Detail of Kyran_Ambrosius in I am Morty Sanchez

Writing quality 2 updating stability 3 Story 1 Character 1 World background 1 The reason I’m giving this review is that the writing quality is poor at best no hate to the author, but he’s constantly asking questions second-guessing his own decisions within the first 15 chapters. He’s changed his own decisions like three times. there’s 50 chapters within a month of it being out I don’t know if he just stockpile chapters or something so I’m gonna give that a three The story is a one because there is no real story. There’s nothing really going on besides porn without plot, which I understand some people enjoy but even then it’s not even very good porn. I gave character a one because there is no real character. It’s just a Gary stew who can apparently do no real wrong and women love him just because you decided it you decided to be completely unrealistic with body proportion, which is your decision and your free to make it. You can’t make the character stick to one thing at a time. you gave him bullshit powers that were never actually used and it went from 0 to 100 in power scaling real fucking fast. i’d give world background a zero if I could not because I hate your work, but simply because there is no real background, you haven’t really explored the characters first life but is fine. You don’t have to, but you’ve gone into nothing about the background characters, the scenery what’s going on behind the scenes. You established nothing. overall, if you’re just looking into some sort of porn Fick, that’s fine. This is for you, but if you’re looking for something with a little bit of substance character, progression of any kind morals and story or any sort of struggle. So essentially things that actually make a story, this is not for you Keep writing author mabye youll make an actual book one day. But keep at it. A real review.