Review Detail of Kuuhaku_28 in Traveling in the Animeverse As Madara

We'll he has the sense of Madara and with the use of Sharingan so... yeah

And like i said it's my first time writing and i didn't put too much detail so tnx for your review ill try to edit it and try to add more details.

That was the problem, without some details you killed the whole story, what are you doing there and giving a summary of what you wanted to follow, but the story has no

80 / 5.000 Sharingan reads movements, increases perception, things like that, not GPS