Review Detail of GMSJakers in ELEMENTO : THE SUPREME GOD OF THE NATURE

Item: ELEMENTO : THE SUPREME GOD OF THE NATURE
Rating: 3.6

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The book has several grammatical errors that confuse you a lot on who's exactly speaking or whether it's the author commentating. The myth concept is intriguing, but if you could fix these errors, the quality would heighten substantially.

ELEMENTO : THE SUPREME GOD OF THE NATURE

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Rishabh_sharma_RISAuthorRishabh_sharma_RIS

bro a web novel is not about a grammar novel grammar novel is different web novel is different so please be different I am writing my own thought and I have plane in first chapter details explaining by a main character and for the confusion I mean the different paragraph different passage so if you read full of concentration you can understand it thank you

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GMSJakersLv1GMSJakers

Well. . . every book needs the right grammar, doesn't matter what type of book it is. While I could be wrong, from what I see, English isn't your first language (based on the lack of commas in your response), so I would say to maybe use Grammarly. From my experience, it does really well in using correct grammar.

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GMSJakersLv1GMSJakers

From what I saw from a different response to another reviewer, you are using a translator in which you forget to use the grammatical mark or something mentioning that. So forgive me for my lack of understanding, but I would still suggest fixing those errors.

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