OK so lets start on this one. 1. The title doesn't Match the opening scene in the slightest and that's kind of necessary in some regard and the complete lack of a synopsis isn't helping. 2. All we got is the usual go school in high school DxD. This is overused by this point and is killing DxD fic's 3. The writting quality is good at least very readable. Overall The author desperately needs some original ideas but has the writing part down.
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