Well I guess the concept is good but Mc is too much of a crybaby in the early chapters like do you expect a Full grown man to cry like that, Not very realistic, Character development I guess it's good, reality checks are kinda annoying but life is often like that, Annoying, so that kinda adds some realistic points.
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