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Jonathan_Lam_2034Lv423dJonathan_Lam_2034

This has great potential. just make sure to watch the pacing, try not to skip around so much. So far I think we have had one small time skip, which was clearly indicated in the story. If you wanna do a bigger one next time make sure to clearly indicated how long the time skip is

OP: Of Wind and Waves

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Sir_StrongholdAuthorSir_Stronghold

Yeah I agree. I was worried about whether I was moving too quick as well. Thanks for the review.

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THEBADgerLv4THEBADger

will this be a harem? if not, who will be the love interest?

Sir_Stronghold:Yeah I agree. I was worried about whether I was moving too quick as well. Thanks for the review.

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Sir_StrongholdAuthorSir_Stronghold

harem. I forgot to add that tag. and most likely Shirahoshi.

THEBADger:will this be a harem? if not, who will be the love interest?

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