Review Detail of WarlockMagus in Almost Invincible (Invincible SI)

This is the best invincible fan fiction I have read. Its better than the invincible tv show. Please don't forget to use the flaxan world as a hide out, training time chamber and use the technology of the world and if possible even improve it. An example would be nano technology. Which can be used by mc, his family, friends and future team if needed to improve physique and healing factor to fight enemies. Please don't drop it its really good.