Review Detail of Raven_Diamond in Ultimate soul eraser system: otherworldly harem

This story wastes no time getting into some adult action, which can be more enjoyable for the male audience or those who want a more erotic read. It is more tell than show and not a lot of emotional stuff to delve into (granted emotional caters to a different audience, so just depends on the demographic the author is shooting for). There are some grammar issues and head hopping. There are hints at other fantasy's the character has, which is common in certain animes (again could be playing more towards male audience and this move would make sense). You get a good feel for what the female characters look like, only a bit of white wall syndrome with the males (easy fix as they grow as a writer). There are a lot of cliches, not a bad thing just something to know as that might be exactly what you're looking for or it may not. Overall, I think this will be either a hit or miss depending on your individual reading tastes/preferences.