The premise is interesting, no harem and no system elevate this novel at least to the top spots of webnovel usual trash. However? Holy cow this is unreadable.it has nothing to do with grammar or spelling but just plain writing. As basically every chinese novel ever written every word or comparison between two thinga has to be either cringy, grandiose or just plain weird; the mc likeevery chinese mc is obsessed, in this case with the girl in question, he doesnt plan and just goes with the flow while coninously saying borderline criminal things to the girl in question. He calls her his WIFE before even meeting her... like wtf? Here is the stupidest example: "I trust Bronya because you are Bronya" like wtf is that supposed to mean, who says something like that?! TLDR: better than the usual webnovel trash, obnoxious to read.
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