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ok its pretty good... now for all my fellow veterans.... I have to warn you. they are a lot of flaws in the military chapters. to give a example the mc is a 2nd Lt and acts like his platoon is a company and he's the company

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NewComer714
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Sorry, I'm still getting the hang of writing about military war, but I'll keep working on it!✍️😗