Okay this is the highest I can give this story there are grammatical errors in this story and the jutsu some of them are not even called right here like during Haku vs naruto secret art of water ice crystal magic mirror technique? Bro it’s Demonic Mirroring Ice Crystals. And the fights I mean made have to reread a passage again to fully understand what is happening. But I hope this gets better as it goes I am going to finish this story and will review again if it improves even a little in these few things I pointed out.
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