Review Detail of ItzNeedless in I Can Create Avatars

Item: I Can Create Avatars
Rating: 5

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ItzNeedlessLv425dItzNeedless

I am feeling lazy today so I will keep it short. Good novel. Good potential. Go read. The only thing I want to nitpick about is the character descriptions. I still have no idea how the MC or those around him look except for the fact the MC is supposed to be handsome. No hair color, no eye color. Only mentions of his awesome jawline. So author, pls add descriptions for all the characters and make an auxiliary chap about it or something seeing as how the novel is already 40+ chaps in i suppose that would be a better solution.

I Can Create Avatars

PsionicMind

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PsionicMindAuthorPsionicMind

Actually, after thinking it through, I've decided that I'll be editing the book. Thank you for the heads up.

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PsionicMindAuthorPsionicMind

Ah yes, looks like I overlooked the description part. Idk if I can fix it right now but I'll see what I can do. As for auxiliary chapters, I do plan on making one that explains how some of the things work and the different power systems, most of which are simple. Thank you for reading!

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ItzNeedlessLv4ItzNeedless

Glad I could help

PsionicMind:Actually, after thinking it through, I've decided that I'll be editing the book. Thank you for the heads up.
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