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Writing Quality 5/5 The writing quality is perfect there is nothing to complain about, It is also incredibly engaging, and the dialogue is top-notch Story Development 1/5 What is the story? there is no story, we don't know why he is there, we don't know what his goal is, and we don't know the fate of the DXD world as Issei is gone and the MC doesn't seem to care about him, but he should... I mean how many world-ending events happened in that godless anime? and the MC is probably the most passive MC I've ever read. why is he doing the thing that he's doing... we may never know, why is he letting girls get close to him? Does he wants to fucks, I doubt it as he has hundreds of chances for that already, so why? why there is so much character development between the MC and his girls yet we don't know why he is doing it Character Design 4/5 good ol-ecchi Characters, nothing to say about it Updating Stability 4/5 Update stability is great for fanfic of this quality World Background 3/5 IDK what to say about the setting, maybe messy is the right word, as I mentioned earlier DXD is here so it is problematic that we didn't see Issei and MC doesn't seem to care, those apocalyptic stuff seems to be forgotten