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MrCAL
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Hey guys! The Author here. Was thinking to review or not but thinking it wouldn’t hurt I guess. I would appreciate any feedback, the tone, pacing, writing. All is appreciated. If you want to see a successful or unsuccessful policy implemented by the character as well, please do put it in the comments.

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I got kidnapped into the game and is forced to become the Governor

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Romance_guy
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Romance?

MrCAL
MrCALAuthorMrCAL

Hello! Romance but it will be very rare. Writing mostly about the failures of Nationbuilding and governments in general.

Romance_guy:Romance?
Romance_guy
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Is it possible to make the story something like Star Wars and mech touch ?

MrCAL:Hello! Romance but it will be very rare. Writing mostly about the failures of Nationbuilding and governments in general.
MrCAL
MrCALAuthorMrCAL

If I were to write something in those universe. It would be the equivalent of the Andor series. Andor also inspired me to write from the Government’s perspective instead of the rebels.

Romance_guy:Is it possible to make the story something like Star Wars and mech touch ?
MrCAL
MrCALAuthorMrCAL

Maybe in the future. If I’m more competent in writing and understand the structure of the bureaucratic government. Following the paper trail and just got lost. Non stop work for the bureaucrats but the generals public don’t see any changes. But a typo error will cost someone their livelihood and to say sorry. A cheque payment.

Romance_guy:Is it possible to make the story something like Star Wars and mech touch ?
KalamitiCker
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The Synopsis is good and alright but the cover needs to be changed.

MrCAL
MrCALAuthorMrCAL

Very true. Trying to find a good one but some are too cartoony for what I want to do. A start up government fails along the way due to incompetent and corrupt leadership

KalamitiCker:The Synopsis is good and alright but the cover needs to be changed.
MrCAL
MrCALAuthorMrCAL

The picture you see right now is from AI generated pic haha. Only one that doesn’t look cartoony and somewhat serious. As my novel being an anti isekai where nothing goes right. I have gone to discord. Now just have to wait 24 hours

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