I was a little confused at first but after reading it carefully, it became easier to understand. Just read a few chapters and I must say the world is well balanced as well as the power system. I want to advise the author not to join two many words together. Readers don't like reading long sentences and make sure to use commas at the right places. That'll be all for now. Overall, It's a great story. I advise the readers to give it a try.
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