Review Detail of JohnWicksPencil in HP: The Plague Doctor
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The story background is very detailed and interesting. To come up with such a plot is commendable on its own and should be respected. There are a few things that I personally find that make this book hard to read such as the fact that because of the time skip and information dump that happened in the beginning the chapters so fat fell choppy. ( basically the story doesn’t really flow right and you jumping from one thing to the next too quickly) besides that this story so far is very detailed and has a very interesting take on the J. K. Rowling’s world combining many different little details that most fanfic writers often overlooked Recommendations to the author 1. To be honest I don’t think you should have started this book at the TriWiz tournament because it has the capacity to be a full length version and it will help readers understand what you have built into the Harry Potter world much better than a few paragraphs could ever hope to do. 2. Going by the poll you had readers do, write down a few notes on important events that have/will happen in your character’s journey along with plot points in the Hogwoart’s timeline that he will inevitably be involved in. 3. Never mind the hate comments. This is YOUR fanfic written by YOUR hand if some idiot has a problem with that tell them to write their own story 4. Constantly updating is always better than nothing. Even if you don’t have anything written tell your readers that the chapters are coming out soon. You could also write ahead of where we (readers) are in order to not have to worry about finishing a chapter so that we (readers) can get to it.
HP: The Plague Doctor
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Thank you for the review. Now, onto answering your points. 1. I think the Triwizard Tournament is the best place to start. I only have one year of Hogwarts to write, then I can expand however I like. I have an section coming up where the MC will be interviewed by Rita Skeeter, and in that I will be going through major changes that has happened in this universe, and what the MC has gone through. Those reading this, feel free to drop question, and I'll try to include them in it. 2. I have a picture of my whiteboard with all the key dates during this volume. I will upload with this so you guys can get an idea of how this year is going to turn out. 3. I'm quite lucky as this fanfic hasn't received as much had as I expected. I have seen so fanfic with a horrendous amount of abuse, and this fanfic comes nowhere near them. There is some hate, but it is drowned out by the overall positive sentiment, so thank you all. 4. I'm currently going through a horrible phase of writers block. Every time I come to write, nothing wants to come out. I had written the next to chapters before this, and they are available on my 'Buy me a coffee' webpage. Every time I finish writing a chapter, it goes on the webpage until I'm ready to mass release.
BoOk_LoV3r_429:Thank you for the review. Now, onto answering your points. 1. I think the Triwizard Tournament is the best place to start. I only have one year of Hogwarts to write, then I can expand however I like. I have an section coming up where the MC will be interviewed by Rita Skeeter, and in that I will be going through major changes that has happened in this universe, and what the MC has gone through. Those reading this, feel free to drop question, and I'll try to include them in it. 2. I have a picture of my whiteboard with all the key dates during this volume. I will upload with this so you guys can get an idea of how this year is going to turn out. 3. I'm quite lucky as this fanfic hasn't received as much had as I expected. I have seen so fanfic with a horrendous amount of abuse, and this fanfic comes nowhere near them. There is some hate, but it is drowned out by the overall positive sentiment, so thank you all. 4. I'm currently going through a horrible phase of writers block. Every time I come to write, nothing wants to come out. I had written the next to chapters before this, and they are available on my 'Buy me a coffee' webpage. Every time I finish writing a chapter, it goes on the webpage until I'm ready to mass release.image
It is stated in 'Auxiliary Chapter - Questions' that Fleur Delacour would be the short term love interest. Whether this Carrie's on into the later parts of the novel depends on the sentiments of the readers.
Tyler_Henline_7485:is there a love interest
BoOk_LoV3r_429:It is stated in 'Auxiliary Chapter - Questions' that Fleur Delacour would be the short term love interest. Whether this Carrie's on into the later parts of the novel depends on the sentiments of the readers.
fleur was done dirty in canon tho, she married a WEASLEY and became a stay at home wife even tho she was crazy talented in the dueling ring
BoOk_LoV3r_429:It is stated in 'Auxiliary Chapter - Questions' that Fleur Delacour would be the short term love interest. Whether this Carrie's on into the later parts of the novel depends on the sentiments of the readers.