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akasuna123
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mc cheats on Hinata developes a harem and gets BJ's from loli hanabi whens shes like 11 or younger.

The Great Swordsman Of The Shinobi World

Malphegor

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Sleepy_thriller
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There is no harem in this novel. Hinata is the only wife.

Malphegor
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Thank you for the first review. To be honest, I never expected this kind of feedback. Don't get me wrong, I anticipated that some people wouldn't like my translation, but... yeah. Thanks for the warning. I haven't read the story that far, and I hope it's not as you described. If it really is, I'll change it like I've done with the chapters until now. Thanks again!

TeuPai
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Vc é doente, precisa de tratamento

malinizgeldii
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My friend, first of all, thank you for this comment. You saved me from a lot of trouble.

malinizgeldii
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My second comment is to the translator. Are you translating the novel without reading it? Normally, before doing this, you must have read the novel and as a fan, you must have loved it. Because I don't think he'll make any big money from it, just a few dollars at most. In addition, if you are changing this novel, you should indicate this in the summary and explain what you did.

Malphegor:Thank you for the first review. To be honest, I never expected this kind of feedback. Don't get me wrong, I anticipated that some people wouldn't like my translation, but... yeah. Thanks for the warning. I haven't read the story that far, and I hope it's not as you described. If it really is, I'll change it like I've done with the chapters until now. Thanks again!
Malphegor
MalphegorAuthorMalphegor

Hi, it has been a while since I read this story. I believe it was up to chapters 50-60, but I'm not entirely sure. I read it when someone was translating it here on Webnovel, but sometimes I couldn't understand the whole chapter, so I stopped reading. I'm not sure if I'm a fan of the original story because I don't know what is going to happen. Maybe I will like it, maybe not. If I don't like it, I am certain that I will modify those parts. I will update the summary, stating that it is modified.

malinizgeldii:My second comment is to the translator. Are you translating the novel without reading it? Normally, before doing this, you must have read the novel and as a fan, you must have loved it. Because I don't think he'll make any big money from it, just a few dollars at most. In addition, if you are changing this novel, you should indicate this in the summary and explain what you did.
Beast_Mode_7653
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He could be lying pls continue to translate this it’s great so far and you can just change some of they story if you want

Malphegor:Hi, it has been a while since I read this story. I believe it was up to chapters 50-60, but I'm not entirely sure. I read it when someone was translating it here on Webnovel, but sometimes I couldn't understand the whole chapter, so I stopped reading. I'm not sure if I'm a fan of the original story because I don't know what is going to happen. Maybe I will like it, maybe not. If I don't like it, I am certain that I will modify those parts. I will update the summary, stating that it is modified.
malinizgeldii
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Should I really believe that there will be no harem and no ridiculous Chinese stupidity? will you do like this?

Malphegor:Hi, it has been a while since I read this story. I believe it was up to chapters 50-60, but I'm not entirely sure. I read it when someone was translating it here on Webnovel, but sometimes I couldn't understand the whole chapter, so I stopped reading. I'm not sure if I'm a fan of the original story because I don't know what is going to happen. Maybe I will like it, maybe not. If I don't like it, I am certain that I will modify those parts. I will update the summary, stating that it is modified.
Malphegor
MalphegorAuthorMalphegor

I can assure you there will be no harem. As for stupidity, that's subjective. There won't be Chinese stupidity because I'm not Chinese, but there may be another kind. Whether it's stupidity or not is up for debate. Culture is complex.

malinizgeldii:Should I really believe that there will be no harem and no ridiculous Chinese stupidity? will you do like this?
Malphegor
MalphegorAuthorMalphegor

Thank you for your support. I will strive to change the aspects I recognize as flawed to the best of my ability.

Beast_Mode_7653:He could be lying pls continue to translate this it’s great so far and you can just change some of they story if you want
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Dieudonner_17
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Makes the cheating much worse Does he really cheat

Sleepy_thriller:There is no harem in this novel. Hinata is the only wife.