you have lots and lost of mistakes in your story for whatever reason and you are not even editing those, I don't know why you are doing this you could make late everything else because at least you should be able to learn that from that b**** hela manipulate others to do your biding but you didn't think about that and you are making everything hate him I don't know for what reason its like you hate everything about that story you could have manipulated them but you choose to not do that are you didn't think about that I am in she is the king of her realm and she has the quality of being a king so at least she should have taught him something similar to male nucleate others to do their work for him and don't forget that he has connection with death herself so she should be able to sense deathly hallows herself
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