Review Detail of zak_moe_5413 in I am secretly a 12th Dimensional Eldritch God

Item: I am secretly a 12th Dimensional Eldritch God
Rating: 1

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The spelling and grammar is fine, but everything about the story feels off. Here we have a 12th-dimensional eldritch god, and yet he's being treated like a mere pet. It's perplexing; the story has a promising concept, but the execution of the storytelling leaves much to be desired.

I am secretly a 12th Dimensional Eldritch God

Daoist_KittyKat

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zak_moe_5413Lv1zak_moe_5413

i understand but why make him a cat of all things and let him act like a pet i will change the rating to 3 stars later on

Daoist_KittyKat:I mean. Its a wish fulfilment fic. not a serious one. if u have problem with that. what else can I do? this is a fic I write for fun only

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Daoist_KittyKatAuthorDaoist_KittyKat

I mean. Its a wish fulfilment fic. not a serious one. if u have problem with that. what else can I do? this is a fic I write for fun only

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Daoist_KittyKatAuthorDaoist_KittyKat

also, gimme a 2-3 stars bro. it's your personal dislike. not a problem on my part

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Daoist_KittyKatAuthorDaoist_KittyKat

thanks, bro. but, who knows. maybe another author out there might get inspired and make one that isnyour liking

zak_moe_5413:i understand but why make him a cat of all things and let him act like a pet i will change the rating to 3 stars later on

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