At chapter 25. For a fic from a first-time author, it's a very interesting story. I liked the introduction of the MC to the Rocket, something rarely seen and that it is still there makes it more interesting. Obviously several details need to be polished, but the story still manages to captivate you and make you want to know more. The interactions with the characters do not feel forced and I like how the characters are presented, my favorites are without a doubt Hilda and Rosa. I think the only thing I could say that needs to be improved are the combats, some feel very fast and lose the emotion, at least that's what I feel. In general the author is doing an excellent job, I hope he doesn't give up.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=More pls][img=More pls] Btw, I read the original version in Spanish, I couldn't say how good the translation is.
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