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Item: The Crab's Dance - A Celtigar's Tale [REUPLOAD]
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SUPER_BOYLv32mthSUPER_BOY

this story so far is great overall this is a great house of the dragon fan fic keep it up i love the characters and i can't wait to see your take on the dance and how the celtigar fit in the dance than the original one in fire and blood keep it up.

The Crab's Dance - A Celtigar's Tale [REUPLOAD]

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Giver_Of_Crabs_165AuthorGiver_Of_Crabs_165

the short is answer is yes. though the path towards there will be a lot different from the books.

SUPER_BOY:it's fine I'm not angry and, my question is will there be a dance of the dragons in this story.

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Giver_Of_Crabs_165AuthorGiver_Of_Crabs_165

thanks! though I would like to say, and don't take this as an insult, you should add commas in between your words. it feels kind of jarring to read your comments, and if you're not a native speaker, don't worry, just keep learning, using google translate is good sometimes, even chatgpt as I used it in this fanfic, and I myself am not a native.

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SUPER_BOYLv3SUPER_BOY

it's fine I'm not angry and, my question is will there be a dance of the dragons in this story.

Giver_Of_Crabs_165:thanks! though I would like to say, and don't take this as an insult, you should add commas in between your words. it feels kind of jarring to read your comments, and if you're not a native speaker, don't worry, just keep learning, using google translate is good sometimes, even chatgpt as I used it in this fanfic, and I myself am not a native.

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