Review Detail of Thissmithy_Manga in DxD: Issei The Abomination

it's hard to understand what's going on in the story tbh, the writing is incomprehensible and illegible in my opinion, I Find myself guessing from paragraph to paragraph as to what is going on because the structure is so poor that the author cannot get his point across. I hope you rewrite your story when your writing abilities improve, thanks.