Review Detail of InLoveWithTheCold in Frieren: The Dark Mage's Diary

It's a medium Chinese script, I don't think at the moment you can even call it ff since everything (I think) that was shown is OC, and honestly it's a bit embarrassing to read, like "right hand or left hand" what difference does it make? Not to mention that even the one I saw has 1- book that honestly made no difference to the plot other than being a danger detector, 2- "magic eyes" eye power fuck you, 3- knowledge of a lineage of wizards, (in addition of talent, and I have to say that this "element" thing sucks) It's kind of like WMW