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This book is a fresh take compared to the rest but it feels a little rushed , no explanation of what the shastra is and how he trains to unlock his powers etc.... a little slowing down and explaining the background would help a lot.
Prithvi: Shastra's Guardian
Kurojuu
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Thanks for your review! Although I have written a few stories, but I am an extreme novice in ACTUALLY publishing my writing. It is indeed rushed, I am trying to learn as I go, understanding what depth I can provide to characters, environment, and how much would derail from continuity. I have few other drafts with me which I am taking extra care of. Once I get less pressure from my day time job, I would pour it in writing. Thanks again!
TitanosLv13Titanos
Kurojuu:Thanks for your review! Although I have written a few stories, but I am an extreme novice in ACTUALLY publishing my writing. It is indeed rushed, I am trying to learn as I go, understanding what depth I can provide to characters, environment, and how much would derail from continuity. I have few other drafts with me which I am taking extra care of. Once I get less pressure from my day time job, I would pour it in writing. Thanks again!