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I've been reading for a long time and for me, when the words between 'example' mean it's a thought, it's strange for me to read, especially conversations that don't seem to have much feeling
INFINITY STONES IN MHA
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Helia_KingLv4Helia_King
While the grammar does need work you also said your mc watched mha but at the end of chapter 8 it’s like he never watched it cause he’s confused on why momo is acting like fissures aren’t normal in this world when they aren’t. You’ll need to fix that.
The_Zephyrous:please comment on my grammar
The_ZephyrousAuthorThe_Zephyrous
actually he thought fissures were normal in power first society. he also assumed that it's non canon.
Helia_King:While the grammar does need work you also said your mc watched mha but at the end of chapter 8 it’s like he never watched it cause he’s confused on why momo is acting like fissures aren’t normal in this world when they aren’t. You’ll need to fix that.
Helia_KingLv4Helia_King
The_Zephyrous:actually he thought fissures were normal in power first society. he also assumed that it's non canon.