Review Detail of transcribed_master in I Become Ironman & overpowered Superman

I tried to give this a shot, but the grammar is worse than a Chinese mtl. Between run-on sentences, punctuations on the wrong spot, or no punctuations used at all. It is extremely hard to follow the story flow. I am all for overpowered characters and the story being flipped on its head, but I want it to be kinda logical. The internet is a beautiful tool that can be extremely helpful at giving us help on things we don't know. I don't want to discourage a new writer, just at least proofread your work and make corrections. Best of luck and keep up the work.