Review Detail of AuthorEgo in Transmigrated to Become King

Item: Transmigrated to Become King
Rating: 4

Review detail

AuthorEgoLv22mthAuthorEgo

I like your descriptions! They are very flavorful but clear. The number system to become king is very interesting, along with the multiple people in one body. Enjoyed your book a lot, keep at it!

Transmigrated to Become King

armordillo

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armordilloAuthorarmordillo

I see. I guess that's an understandable sentiment, considering the circumstances. Thank you for taking the time to reply.

AuthorEgo:Sure. I felt like there wasn’t a good sense of who the main character was. Obviously it’s the number, but the voice of whoever it is seemed out of place, or even just off.

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armordilloAuthorarmordillo

Thanks for reading! Is there something specific that would have made you give it five stars instead of four? (I'm just asking to see if it's something I can improve.)

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AuthorEgoLv2AuthorEgo

Sure. I felt like there wasn’t a good sense of who the main character was. Obviously it’s the number, but the voice of whoever it is seemed out of place, or even just off.

armordillo:Thanks for reading! Is there something specific that would have made you give it five stars instead of four? (I'm just asking to see if it's something I can improve.)

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