Review Detail of Nafis_Zhafran_1110 in Naruto: Yūki clan

Item: Naruto: Yūki clan
Rating: 4

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I will read again and update the stars after 25 chapters.and advice to writers, please tidy up the layout of my writing, it's a bit difficult to read. Oh, did he create a country or become a daimo puppet?

Naruto: Yūki clan

TheprimordialGod

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TheprimordialGodAuthorTheprimordialGod

And yeah I do agree my writing style it’s a bit difficult I mainly write for fun it’s a passion never thought of improving my writing style

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TheprimordialGodAuthorTheprimordialGod

He will creat his own country

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APOCALYPTIC_NOVELSLv4APOCALYPTIC_NOVELS

is this a weak to strong ff

TheprimordialGod:He will creat his own country

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