I see great potential here. So DO NOT disappoint and keep updating. Here a few PS for future chapters. . PS - Here's a few suggestions from my side, wether you implement them or notz it's up to you. 1. DO NOT make the MC a Simp or beta. I hate those bastards who can't be honest with themselves and take what they want. 2. It's important to delve deeper into the charactor development, but try not stretch it too much before reaching to the really good stuff. 3. Make sure to utilse the full potential of the abilities that the mc have or may get in the future. Even if it gets a little dark, I'm ok with it including most of us. I may add another review in the future or edit this one depending on the direction of this story. That would be all. ✌🏻
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