has potential, a not so appealing character who can develop with the power system of friere's world, of course this depends on trying to keep things balanced... I'll try to follow, but I don't really like stories where the protagonist was a woman in her previous life, I can't "identify" myself in the story, but that's just a personal opinion. Good luck with the story and I'll be waiting for updates.
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