Review Detail of GonadSmasher08 in The Omni Money System

hmmm 1st what makes this novel a fan fiction? . . . . . 2nd the book started ok but as the story progress it slowly turns mediocre . . . . . 3rd the flow of the story is erratic, most of the time it will suddenly jumps to another point . . . . . 4th the story started to become hard to read . . . . . 5th overall the story is not worth it . . . . . it just lacks the content wherein you find your self fulfilled when reading it