Review Detail of RestingSydrome in Omni SandBox
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Okay soooo, this type of story has been in the back of my mind for countless days and I just decided to write it. But idk if I should continue it, I may get post 10 chapters and see how it goes but that’s all. I am a new writer so please leave suggestions on what I could do better and please help me in economic and political field as I am nowhere near in knowing those fields to know how they talk or what their response and actions are to this kind of stuff.
Omni SandBox
RestingSydrome
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Hello Mighty Customer here! 😁 The idea for this novel is interesting but let me tell you some point that might help. 1. Keep eng grammer on mark. Give a healthy amount of First Person & Third Person POV. 2. Don't make this a Gotta Catch em all Harem 🤕 Novel. 1 or 2 love interest at most. 3. The Idea of Sandbox is already way Overpowered, So don't immediately make him a Super Duper Uber God. The sheer possibilities of Sandbox are limitless. 4. You can blend Scifi & magic genre together in this I guess. 5. Maybe you can also add different world travel element in this novel. 6. Also MOST IMPORTANT: Don't make the MC a dense, beta and a dumb idiot kind of guy. This just ruins the story and character development can hardly work here sometimes. I hope the points i made to help u don't discourage u. The idea is gr8 and i hope you can create a Gem out of this. [img=recommend]
Thank you for the feedback and yes there is no harem plus I definitely thought of him traveling to other universes and worlds that housed different elements. Like from anime to tv shows but yeah magic is a go Also, I don’t know what that beta, dumb Mc is 😅 I have no idea how you write someone like that. And the last part, yeah he’s op like super duper. Idk how I’m going to nerf him? Or do I even need to? I don’t think
Easy_OP999Life:Hello Mighty Customer here! 😁 The idea for this novel is interesting but let me tell you some point that might help. 1. Keep eng grammer on mark. Give a healthy amount of First Person & Third Person POV. 2. Don't make this a Gotta Catch em all Harem 🤕 Novel. 1 or 2 love interest at most. 3. The Idea of Sandbox is already way Overpowered, So don't immediately make him a Super Duper Uber God. The sheer possibilities of Sandbox are limitless. 4. You can blend Scifi & magic genre together in this I guess. 5. Maybe you can also add different world travel element in this novel. 6. Also MOST IMPORTANT: Don't make the MC a dense, beta and a dumb idiot kind of guy. This just ruins the story and character development can hardly work here sometimes. I hope the points i made to help u don't discourage u. The idea is gr8 and i hope you can create a Gem out of this. [img=recommend]