Review Detail of Xander_Paz in Highschool DxD: Dragon's Ascent

I don't feel that what made dxd what it is is that it was echi no hentai and in fanfic they go a lot towards hentai. Yes it is good but in the end it ends up as porn with a plot or porn with a lot of plot, I think that at the beginning you were going very well but I feel that little by little you are leaning more towards that abyss.... but if the concept and the writing are good, congratulations