Review Detail of GRIM_REAPER_BARBIE in Shadow Lord Returns

oh 😐

yeah, AI has a way of generating contents, and your first chapter has all the red flags

Oh, am sorry if you think so, but it's actually not

ohh so I'm right. haha 😅😅

and yes did read up to 10 chapters. but it a good story. but it lack something, it like reading a mathematical text.

no, its all done by me

it's because it's just the beginning of the story, stay tuned.

ok, let me catch up

cool

I don't necessarily think it's done by AI, but it does feel like it lacks a little human touch to the writing. It feels more like a poem or a descriptive essay or a school project than an actual story. it's fairly interesting, but not quite captivating enough as theres an excessive use of big languages and makes the author come off as high-and-mighty. Most of the readers are not going to grasp or easily imagine what is being narrated here. And there is so few dialogue as well. but is it a fine read. Yes. Still depends on a reader. Most will find it difficult to read, I'm certain.