Review Detail of superAyan in DRAW TO LOVE YOU
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I like the author's writing style^^, it's good and engaging, hoping for this book to gain more readers as well! And a bit of suggestion though, some of the paragraphs are too long, it's readable but some readers are finding them straining to read(I did the same before and a reader pointed it and it's a lot better to me, just sharing pls don't be offended) and synopsis is too short^^ This book still has few chaps but it's a good read already!!
DRAW TO LOVE YOU
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Thank you for the sharing. Before this, I chopped the paragraph but I find it feels too many ‘enter’. So I put some sentences together. I will try to balance it. As a reader, how much sentences in a paragraph do you feel the most comfortable enough to read? And if you aware, I mostly put direct speech first, then the explanation. Do you find it hard to digest? I love to find a reader that I could talk to, so I can improve my writing. Thanks a lot for your suggestion. I do really appreciate that🥳
you're welcome! 3 or 4 sentences is fine, but it depends from the flow of the story. I mean you can cut apart those not really connected and jump another paragraph^^ and your writing style isn't hard to digest at all, you use words not too deep and complicated too:)
SCARLETZEE:Thank you for the sharing. Before this, I chopped the paragraph but I find it feels too many ‘enter’. So I put some sentences together. I will try to balance it. As a reader, how much sentences in a paragraph do you feel the most comfortable enough to read? And if you aware, I mostly put direct speech first, then the explanation. Do you find it hard to digest? I love to find a reader that I could talk to, so I can improve my writing. Thanks a lot for your suggestion. I do really appreciate that🥳