Review Detail of OakFlame in Beyond Seeker

Interesting start with a lot of mystery. I enjoyed the transition after the first chapter. Writing quality- didn't notice any errors, solid. Updates- remains to be seen, but hopefully will be consistent! Story- I'm very interested right now. Some spooky stuff has been happening, and I'm looking forward to how the Raven will deal with it. Character design- Interesting so far, enough to keep me hooked. I'm anticipating their future development! World background- Probably my favorite part so far, it is an interesting and uncommon setting. In the future, there's magic, and there's spooky stuff. I like it!