I think it has potential, its a very good concept. I do have some questions for the author. 1. How big is their family, how was the world like, and he should please shed more light on that time of training, how long as it
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LIKEAGENTCOGENT:We were planning on trying to build that throughout the story not entirely through flashbacks but more so teases of the families dynamic and overall learning about the family before hand and his relationship with his brother. The family is not large, just Hogarth, the Nephew, Hogarth's brother and his wife, and a sister, they will all have roles within the story. The world before and as you will see throughout the story is quite peaceful as this takes place in the far future when a group of activists succeeds in world peace(or as far as world peace is possible) through more gruesome means but still worked non the less. Throughout the story, interactions with the nephew will show these more and more.
We were planning on trying to build that throughout the story not entirely through flashbacks but more so teases of the families dynamic and overall learning about the family before hand and his relationship with his brother. The family is not large, just Hogarth, the Nephew, Hogarth's brother and his wife, and a sister, they will all have roles within the story. The world before and as you will see throughout the story is quite peaceful as this takes place in the far future when a group of activists succeeds in world peace(or as far as world peace is possible) through more gruesome means but still worked non the less. Throughout the story, interactions with the nephew will show these more and more.