Review Detail of ReaderCat in Herobrine in Marvel

Item: Herobrine in Marvel
Rating: 3.6

Review detail

ReaderCatLv21mthReaderCat

It sounds a bit confusing, but it starts to be understood as you read. Not bad for killing time. I read up to "C38". But in "C38" the fourth wall is literally f*cked. I found this a bit disturbing. That's why I stopped reading.

Herobrine in Marvel

Fav_is_Romance

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Fav_is_RomanceAuthorFav_is_Romance

That is my bad sense of humour I literally was about to remove it while I am editing my recent Chapters, your review remind it again thanks for review.

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ReaderCatLv2ReaderCat

I understand, I will take another look at it in the future and write a review again.

Fav_is_Romance:That is my bad sense of humour I literally was about to remove it while I am editing my recent Chapters, your review remind it again thanks for review.

1mth

DaoistTranslatorLv13DaoistTranslator

Have you already removed it? 4th wall breaks are hard to implement properly, and when you do it wrong, it would directly lower your novel's quality by a grade

Fav_is_Romance:That is my bad sense of humour I literally was about to remove it while I am editing my recent Chapters, your review remind it again thanks for review.

1mth

Fav_is_RomanceAuthorFav_is_Romance

Yeah already did 4th wall that thing was just a try and it failed miserably

DaoistTranslator:Have you already removed it? 4th wall breaks are hard to implement properly, and when you do it wrong, it would directly lower your novel's quality by a grade

1mth